it will be Thursday soon...exactly...um...2 hours...i think i was sick for half the day cuz i felt weak unless it was sleepiness or laziness.. not too sure
any who---i shall share something with you ( below )
" LIGHT OF YOUR SMILE "
the motion you create, makes me stop where i stand
the glow you give off, makes this love expand
each sound you create, catches my ear instantly
the eyes you're blessed with, returns my sanity
the many words you speak, in my heart are stacked in piles
Creator of this love, with just the light of your smile....
good??? here's #2 ( below )
" FORBIDDEN "
please forgive me for retreating, the words i sent you weren't misleading
the support i sent you i don't regret, the love i have i must forget
i can't erase your face, it won't allow another man to take your place
i suffer from loving you too much, you took over like, words, dreams and such
I'm sorry for abandoning you in a hurry, i had no choice but save myself from misery
i had nothing left to do, i am forever forbidden to love YOU!!!!
okay???
i know i said I'd share a piece from my yet finished story but i thought i can give you two poems to replace it for now..so what cha think?? are they good? bad? awesome? poor? great? or not bad?....i can never rate my own writing because i believe I'll say what i wanna hear :)
any who---today was great...my nephew who is almost 1 (on 10-10 ) he gave me some kisses on my cheek :)!!!! funny cuz he didn't want to kiss anyone else..not even his own mama!! how cool is that? i always say he's my son that my sister just popped him out for me he he^^
anyways---gotta cut it short..peace and chicken strips :)
~ Aida!!!!
Wednesday, October 1, 2008
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This is cute. I'm gonna write some post when i have time.
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