Friday, October 10, 2008

BEST OF POETRY # 1

this is the first poem to be added to the BEST OF POETRY category

" THE"
the eyes, the nose, the tears
the color, the height, the fears
the voice, the speech, the lips
the air, the clothes, the finger tips
the giggle, the smile, the charm
the love, the heart, the one to bring no harm
the talent, the intelligence, the stare
the prom, the divorce, the gray hairs
the dance, the CD, the song
the party, the feet, the wrong
the hair, the skin, the dimples
the scars, the hurt, thank god no pimples
the laughter, the breath, the sleep
the car, the city, the peeps
the fight, the screams, the yells
the bird, the dolphin, what the hell?
the phobia, the food, the style
the toes, the teeth, the walk down the aisle
the scratch, the blood, the book
the stomp, the grab, the left hook
the show, the time, the hours
the dream, the store, the flowers
the website, the typing, the screen
the blond, the brown, the green
the flaws, the cake, the heavens
the walk, the job, the five foot eleven
the pen, the ink, the paper
the cops, the judge, the raper
the insecurities, the sighs, the look
the flight, the guards, the trip you took
the ugly, the rude, the mean
the stroll, the promise, the scene
the words, the fun, the poor
the strippers, the pimps, the whores
the danger, the memories, the pain
the washer, the water, the GAIN
the cards, the steps, the wonder
the creations, the excitement, the founder
the crowd, the glimpse, the thought
the sad, the happy, the well-taught
the beginning, the past, the trend
the pre-school, the family, THE END

how was it?..this is the only poem that anyone has ever read in front of me or with me knowing, i received good feedback though i believe they said it to not make me feel down. but OH WELL
i think I'm done for the day

PEASHHH AAAUUUUTTTTU!!
~Aida!!

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